alexkmmll Major
Posts : 826 Join date : 2009-11-01 Age : 27 Location : Madison, WI
| Subject: Poem writing... yeah Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:42 am | |
| So we had to write some stupid poems for school, and I wrote this in the last ten minutes, so don't hate! Ive been on AA for the past 30 minutes so the first thing that came to mind was Airsoft, so, without adue, here we go: Airsoft
The adrenaline pulses though my veins by the gallons I lick the salty drops of sweat off my trembling upper lip Gripping my muddy weapon tight, I prepare myself Physically, I am ready But in my head, only questions are in my thoughts Instinctively, my body moves towards the ground Hiding from the rain of pellets above I concentrate, and my mind clears No more fear No more questions No more pain Instead, they’ve been replaced With strength With Courage With sound of mind My eyes flicker about, as if the world around me is traveling faster then light A let up in the snaps and pings around me signals my chance My head pulses, my heart beats I stand I run I charge I yell I bring my weapon up to my shoulder And place the cherry red dot on my targets Whap, whap, whap, whap The sound rings through my head From the corner of my vision, a figure appears Zip, zip, zip Ping, ping, ping My leg stings, my arm burns I fall Game Over Until next round Ya, its really not too great, at all. haha | |
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Spl. Durkee General Grade 2
Posts : 4652 Join date : 2009-03-28 Age : 67
| Subject: Re: Poem writing... yeah Tue Dec 07, 2010 2:27 am | |
| Deep.
Like... Like. Donkey butt deep. | |
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alexkmmll Major
Posts : 826 Join date : 2009-11-01 Age : 27 Location : Madison, WI
| Subject: Re: Poem writing... yeah Tue Dec 07, 2010 10:19 pm | |
| Like, Donkey Butt Bad... Bleh I hate poem writing hahaha | |
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Spl. Durkee General Grade 2
Posts : 4652 Join date : 2009-03-28 Age : 67
| Subject: Re: Poem writing... yeah Tue Dec 07, 2010 10:25 pm | |
| - alexkmmll wrote:
- Like, Donkey Butt Bad...
Bleh I hate poem writing hahaha Naw, was great. Really captures the pace of the game. | |
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A. sniper Major
Posts : 502 Join date : 2010-05-14 Age : 30 Location : The Great State of Texas
| Subject: Re: Poem writing... yeah Wed Dec 08, 2010 2:16 pm | |
| you say, you came up with that in ten minutes? that's really good! durkee's right, it definitely captures the feel of an airsoft game. absolutely perfect! | |
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